i lose all respect for people that come out with tracks that are less than a minute or slightly less than two, the only time its acceptable is if you got a full length album and you just so happen to have one track thats shorter or else its just a skit.
with that being said this aint good... but do you happen to have the Mythology instrumental that Jonwayne goes over??? been looking for that for ages now.
and yo lightningpillhead stick to doing what you were doing that folk/pop and if you feel a couple good bars of rap throw em in that shit cause this aint working out for anyone. if you had a girlfriend im sure she'd be opposed to these here tracks
If I were single and my WIFE actually listened to hip-hop, I admit I'd probably be tripping a little bit inside, but nope.
And personally, I would agree with you all that the delivery is a bit off. I'm not a rapper. Again, I just did it to kill some time and entertain myself. BUT what would I do about this: a few people claimed to like "Alice in Wonderland" (three people) and even went so far as to repost that some shitty song FOUR TIMES AND "Peter Pan" was loved twice and reposted once. I also gained a new follower because of me fucking around with those beats. What I'm trying to get at is this: That's more Soundcloud love than I EVER got on my Soundcloud page for my pop/folk tracks, and those tracks are free downloads! (my soundcloud is www.soundcloud.com/csoim-blank-vids, by the way) The only tracks that ever came close to getting THAT much love on the page are a few remixes I did and a Squarepusher cover.
So, whether my wife would hate it or not, I am just going to go ahead and follow these three words: "numbers don't lie".
Don't worry, though. This doesn't mean I will start rapping more. I just really love those beats, and wanted SOMEBODY to rap over them. If you won't, you know good and well I will.
Now, back to my serious shit.