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#1 Mister Yo

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Posted Yesterday, 08:55 AM


if youve been following the mister yo saga this is actually the first song i ever constructed.


check it out if anyone follows and comments on this board still

#2 James Frank.

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Posted Yesterday, 11:00 AM

i think the flow needs improvement...but it's not that bad.

MTG raps are a new thing, i guess.


the next thing for you would probably be to work on things like recording better vocal takes, EQ, mixing/mastering, as well as pushing yourself out of your comfort zone in terms of song-writing.


concentrate more on trying to, like, actually say something that might register with your audience instead of shoe-horning in all of the rhyming words you thought of for a particular couplet...i know that's something i used to do too, but now i just write line-by-line and really think about what should come next before i put anything down.

#3 Mister Yo

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Posted Yesterday, 01:24 PM

yeah like i said this was my first track ever and i thought id come up with three different flows.


i think a lot of stuff said in this song can register with people though even if its just a nasty visual

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