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#1 Dj Tiger

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Posted 29 May 2014 - 08:14 AM



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Posted 07 June 2014 - 10:43 PM

just had a listen to these,

 

some nice chops but you could switch up the velocity of your drums,

like the hi hats in your 1st beat for example, make them hit at different volumes to make it sound more live

 

something you might wanna consider is making these snippets around a minute,

when you're working with 1 bar or half bar loops, you don't need to let them run so long but thats up to you



#3 Edbeatwell

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Posted 10 June 2014 - 11:15 PM

You definitely have your own style,I like how detailed the texture is on both tracks, you manage to make it sound fluent even though the chops are short, well done! But I'd agree with OKJoy the drums sound a bit mechanical and shorter tracks will keep it interesting. Cheers





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